<div>收錄：陳林（超樂人求是緣-永吉）</div><div>編輯：陳林（超樂人求是緣-永吉）</div><div>簡評：陳林（超樂人求是緣-永吉）</div><div>攝影：陳林（超樂人求是緣-永吉）</div>2021年8月湄潭對聯(lián)第四次作業(yè)。<br data-filtered="filtered">一、題目：請您對下聯(lián)。上聯(lián)：咬文嚼字吐新作；（選自《對聯(lián)》）<br data-filtered="filtered">二、請聯(lián)友定稿后接龍發(fā)到群里。陳林負責(zé)收稿，8月30日截稿。<br data-filtered="filtered"><br data-filtered="filtered">1. 陳林<br data-filtered="filtered">博古覽今讀美篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：拙作，以拋磚引玉。<br data-filtered="filtered">2.姜蘭<br data-filtered="filtered">刮肚搜腸對下聯(lián)。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">3. 婁山<br data-filtered="filtered">費雪飛霜寫雅章。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：“費雪”費解。<br data-filtered="filtered">4.孫傳友<br data-filtered="filtered">晃腦搖頭吟古篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">5.熊光明<br data-filtered="filtered">把酒臨風(fēng)歌盛情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">6.李家舉<br data-filtered="filtered">繪景描圖寫錦章。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">7.王禮坤<br data-filtered="filtered">賦韻題詩憶舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">8.馬傳學(xué)<br data-filtered="filtered">依山傍水繪錦繡。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：“山”平當(dāng)仄，“水”仄當(dāng)平，“繡”仄當(dāng)平?？筛臑椋喊郎嚼L錦圖。<br data-filtered="filtered">9.宋忠睿<br data-filtered="filtered">煮酒吟詩賞雪花。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">10.覃林<br data-filtered="filtered">摘句尋章填舊詞。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">11.湛制憲<br data-filtered="filtered">念友思朋懷舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">12.羅毅<br data-filtered="filtered">聚友邀朋開老壇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">13.徐洪喜<br data-filtered="filtered">吃醋爭風(fēng)傳丑聞。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">14.劉國涌<br data-filtered="filtered">攜禮驅(qū)車回故鄉(xiāng)。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">15.晏銘<br data-filtered="filtered">把盞推杯敘舊情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">16.陳忠敏<br data-filtered="filtered">造句遣詞出好篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">17.郭福豪<br data-filtered="filtered">閉目低頭憶舊家。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">18.劉丞濤<br data-filtered="filtered">納語吟詩展錦心。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<br data-filtered="filtered">19.石元良<br data-filtered="filtered">吟詩作對歌盛世。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：“詩”平當(dāng)仄，“對”仄當(dāng)平。“世”仄當(dāng)平。<br data-filtered="filtered">20.李家廣<br data-filtered="filtered">借物傳情著錦篇。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：合格。<div><div>21.陳濤<br data-filtered="filtered">看水觀山思故情。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">22.劉仲舉<br data-filtered="filtered">游目騁懷吟大江。<br data-filtered="filtered">簡評：優(yōu)。<br data-filtered="filtered">23.何登峰<br data-filtered="filtered">橫槊賦詩傳古風(fēng)。<br data-filtered="filtered"></div><div>簡評：優(yōu)。</div><div><br data-filtered="filtered"></div></div> 湄潭縣城夜景