<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">(歡樂(lè)聯(lián)粹)第十期周賽8.17</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)析:月光倒映于流水之上，隨波浮動(dòng)，落花也隨著流動(dòng)中的月光一起逐波遠(yuǎn)遁，直至虛緲……</p><p class="ql-block">月光與流水、落花交融，顯現(xiàn)出明凈、澄澈、的質(zhì)感，營(yíng)塑一種恬靜、清婉……唯美的意境。</p><p class="ql-block">情懷上寄托了，對(duì)往昔歡愉的追憶；與表述對(duì)年華易逝一去不復(fù)返，那份淡淡而又莫名的感傷。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">古木篩風(fēng)鳥(niǎo)囀來(lái)（慕箐）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)岫傳鐘僧緩行（慕箐）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小棹犁煙魚(yú)散遲（慕箐）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">灞岸飛煙柳綰來(lái)（皖蘇）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（清歡）</p><p class="ql-block">小院送風(fēng)夢(mèng)漸來(lái)（櫻花塵夢(mèng)）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">暖閣聽(tīng)簫夢(mèng)帶飛(歲月如風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">短笛吹曲雅自來(lái)（櫻花塵夢(mèng)）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去 (清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">曲岸環(huán)煙舟欲歸（灰姑娘）</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)岫含云鳥(niǎo)緩飛（灰姑娘）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">老樹(shù)聽(tīng)泉鳥(niǎo)對(duì)眠(如歌)</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)岫棲云鳥(niǎo)自鳴(如歌)</p><p class="ql-block">野岸含煙柳欲眠(如歌)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">茅舍籠紗人自眠（無(wú)花）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小院聽(tīng)風(fēng)夢(mèng)未殘（豆豆）A</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小艾思君字未成（鄒興原）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">半夜聞簫夢(mèng)忽醒（鄒興原）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小徑逢春鳥(niǎo)亂啼（煙花）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小徑凝香秋未臨（雨寒）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">古徑吹簫蟲(chóng)伴吟（春雷)A</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">野渡無(wú)人舟自橫(皖蘇)集A</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">野谷生香蝶自來(lái)（無(wú)花）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">野嶺拉風(fēng)雪自來(lái)（如平）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">夤夜憑欄影自寒(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">土匪劫財(cái)警已來(lái)(如歌)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月如風(fēng)對(duì)不來(lái)(皖蘇)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（請(qǐng)歡）</p><p class="ql-block">碧海浮云風(fēng)送行（孤客）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小院飛霜蛩獨(dú)吟(歲月如風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（清歡）</p><p class="ql-block">修竹挽風(fēng)露夢(mèng)歸（華鎣）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)浦清風(fēng)鶴引來(lái)（我心依然）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)嶺浮煙雁帶歸(貓)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（清歡）</p><p class="ql-block">曲岸浮煙柳自搖（心陽(yáng)光）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（清歡）</p><p class="ql-block">短笛橫江人未歸（酒翁）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去（清歡）</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)浦浮煙舟載歸（十三香）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">深谷清風(fēng)客自來(lái)（小輝）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">小榭聽(tīng)風(fēng)葉自飄(貓)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)溝流月花隨去(清歡)</p><p class="ql-block">孤館聽(tīng)風(fēng)客未眠(天邊一抹)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">后記:①月光倒映于水面并隨波遠(yuǎn)遁，說(shuō)明是入夜時(shí)分，天氣狀況是極度晴朗。所以相對(duì)于日間景象或有煙霧存在的場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)，是不協(xié)調(diào)的存在。②落花時(shí)節(jié)并可附波逐流的應(yīng)為暮春或深秋時(shí)節(jié)，此時(shí)對(duì)仗初春景象是屬時(shí)間倒序。③上下聯(lián)要存在關(guān)聯(lián)度，可連貫、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折……就是平行意上也要統(tǒng)一于同一主題。④部分對(duì)仗關(guān)聯(lián)皆可，但修飾上優(yōu)美程度不足，或意境不夠自然雅致……故也不在優(yōu)選考慮范圍之內(nèi)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">→歲月如風(fēng)</p>