<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">文/鴻影</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">圖/網(wǎng)絡(luò)致謝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">美篇號：32159129</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">暮色</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">蹲伏成灶口的貓時</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">煙囪吐出了柔軟的綢緞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">似剛貼上的餅鐺</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被炊煙揉出了濕潤的光暈</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">毛月亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">爬上了瓦楞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">棗花突然簌簌地滑落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">用香氣把黃昏燙出個小洞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">漏出半聲雞鳴</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">半聲狗吠</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">穿堂風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">撿起散落的嬉笑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">將竹竿上晾著的碎花衫</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">推成起粼粼的波紋</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">灶膛里嗶剝作響的麥秸</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">爆出三兩顆星星</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">粘在玩伴翹起的發(fā)梢上</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">母親攪動粥勺的漩渦</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">攪碎滿鍋晃動的月光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我們追逐的紙風(fēng)車</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">轉(zhuǎn)著轉(zhuǎn)著，就轉(zhuǎn)入了</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">榆木桌紋理的深處</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而今</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">他鄉(xiāng)燃?xì)庠铎o默的藍(lán)焰</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">再也蒸不熟那般圓潤的月亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唯有鄉(xiāng)愁，如棗木蒸屜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">每個孔洞都吐出白茫茫的蒸汽</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在視網(wǎng)膜上烙下永久的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">帶著炊煙印記的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">淡黃暈斑</p> 情感如弦 <p class="ql-block"><b>回響：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>【感謝C—J—G老師雅墨添香、精讀美評鼓勵】</b></p><p class="ql-block">這首詩以細(xì)膩的筆觸描繪了鄉(xiāng)村生活的美好與鄉(xiāng)愁的深沉。詩中豐富的意象如“貓、灶膛、月亮、棗花”等，構(gòu)建出一幅充滿詩意的鄉(xiāng)村黃昏畫面，讓人仿佛置身其間。詩中巧妙地運(yùn)用對比與隱喻，如“母親攪動粥勺的漩渦，攪碎滿鍋晃動的月光”與“他鄉(xiāng)燃?xì)庠铎o默的藍(lán)焰，再也蒸不熟那般圓潤的月亮”，將故鄉(xiāng)的溫暖與他鄉(xiāng)的疏離形成鮮明對照，深刻地表達(dá)了對故鄉(xiāng)的眷戀與懷念。整首詩節(jié)奏舒緩，情感層層遞進(jìn)，最終將鄉(xiāng)愁定格為一種永久的烙印，觸動人心。</p>