成人小说图片视频|一区二区亚洲视频|欧美成人18刺激毛片|欧美黄色一级视频视频|99少妇无码在线|手机在线黄色A级小电影|亚洲一二三区午夜电影在线观看|欧美一区二区三区巨大|国产三级无码高清|图片区综合校园中文字幕

休閑詩詞(第194期)

海闊天空

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 錄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩 二、選萃詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩 四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中秋望興安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋霜漫染興安嶺,五色層林接遠(yuǎn)穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桂魄初懸清靄外,銀光遍灑碧巒中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三杯暖酒思丹桂,一曲長歌頌錦楓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身在天涯無寂寞,今宵明月與君同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒露即景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一陣清寒浸客裳,疏荷褪盡菊初黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">層林遍染五花色,曲水輕流兩岸光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">叟釣無閑尋野趣,人游得意醉秋香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">休言此季風(fēng)華盡,且把詩情寄早霜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">垂釣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">垂釣河邊趣味濃,靜心等候浪花騰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">魚兒不曉紅塵險(xiǎn),少慮成災(zāi)惡夢(mèng)生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驪城第一場(chǎng)大雪吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞠馥陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初雪朦朦遠(yuǎn)岺空,荷塘蛙伏水彰窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巷中菊蕊黃搖白,陌上苔皮綠變紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">送貨青年行路急,迷詩老叟詠音隆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿城澎湃瓊花落,盛似長離又重逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張騫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄭坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年青志壯遠(yuǎn)京城,盡展豪情仗劍行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏遍山南諸國土,再征嶺北鬼奴平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鑿空使者蠻夷敬,華夏文明異域生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薪火遙傳功業(yè)厚,絲綢路上古今榮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔越調(diào)·天凈沙〕烏伊嶺我的家(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀聲林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紅松白樺灰鴉,獐狍野鹿熊瞎,濕地藍(lán)天綠崖。烏伊嶺下,小橋流水咱家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋 韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愜意憑欄望晚霞,幾叢碧草隱鳴蛙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幽幽林徑葉如蝶,莽莽田疇煙似紗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉露侵衣吟淺月,金風(fēng)入酒醉黃花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情絲引得心旌蕩,笑對(duì)江天賦歲嘉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尚志公園抒懷(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尚志公園菊滿園,襯托雕像閃光環(huán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">條條步道松枝掩,片片花池鎖鏈攔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西側(cè)秧歌傳美韻,東邊樂曲頌豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金秋演繹金秋景,奉上仙葩敬偉賢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少年游?東房山的桔?;?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">虛水靈風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 那邊鮮活,這廂老去,彈著豎琴香。解釋憂傷,勻開過往,前世已蒼茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋風(fēng)沉淀春思緒,庭院沁微涼。有心無恙,蔚藍(lán)消息,留在我身旁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阮郎歸?花型紅辣椒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老疙瘩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 青枝綠葉掩靈苞,鮮紅似火燒。有緣經(jīng)過細(xì)觀瞧,平生第一遭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 芍藥艷,牡丹嬌。東君妙手調(diào)。煽情西陸趕時(shí)髦,臨風(fēng)款玉簫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文友相聚在翠巒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金淑芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩社文朋近日還,相逢把酒盡開顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茶香細(xì)煮松風(fēng)外,詩韻初翻樹影間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾載離懷歸酒盞,半生豪氣潤江山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵莫問明朝事,且共同餐賞友嫻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安秋韻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張永學(xué)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">征雁南遷又遠(yuǎn)游,露侵點(diǎn)染滿瞳秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楓盈赤葉邀霜伴,酒溢醇香將客留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">覽勝群山披錦繡,題詩一嶺醉清幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">眼中美景疑仙境,鶴影松濤共白頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仲秋季節(jié)送友人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仲秋送友酷霜多,把酒傾懷話別歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身恙自知難再見,心康珍重慰言磋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">視頻互動(dòng)真情戀,快遞郵需誠誼和。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遙寄留連余暮樂,南疆北域不蹉跎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一剪梅·國慶有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畢金來</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 皓月當(dāng)空展笑眉,鞭炮齊鳴,鑼鼓如雷。迎來佳節(jié)喜光垂。大地披紅,捷報(bào)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 五彩繽紛山色奇,秋果飄香,米谷成堆。國民富博萬家輝,萬眾歡欣,醉酒千杯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉禮祥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桂謝殘金菊謝香,雁成人字鷺成行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故廬玩伴今何在?似我江郎鬢染霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林城初雪感懷(古風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常剛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深秋初雪飄興安,靜賞梨花舞窗前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楓赤柏蒼凝冷翠,菊黃草瘦沁清寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭臺(tái)寂寂人無影,水落粼粼荷半殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溫酒一杯抒雅意,讀書吟句心韻寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)倚西窗望雪花,憑欄閑品暖香茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瑤臺(tái)仙袂隨風(fēng)舞,千里江山覆玉紗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)厲猶存松勁骨,霜寒暫斂柳新芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲月蒼茫皆過眼,不追名利念芳華。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行香子?大箐山四季(依龍譜.蘇軾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 溪破冰芽,風(fēng)剪青紗。大箐山、孕育精華。林陰隧道,樹影人家。有柳梢月,空中鶩,天邊霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 白楊宿鳥,紅葉驚鴉。小鄉(xiāng)村、八月星槎。三秋菊蕊,半夜梨花。看一湖冰,一園雪,一群娃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋暮悅馨園即景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">范連韌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">袷衫負(fù)手立回廊,坐看紅云送夕陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏葉斜枝篩晚照,臨風(fēng)寒菊泛新黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一痕瘦月青松影,萬里清輝白露霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喟嘆駒陰彈指過,蒼頭默戀舊時(shí)光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世界糧食日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汗灑田疇育稻秧,豐殷徑寨見牛羊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盤盈稷黍濃情盡,箸盛肴蔬醉味長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨順農(nóng)耕多富裕,風(fēng)調(diào)沃土少災(zāi)荒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">環(huán)球企盼無饑餓,域眾欣期享泰康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賞菊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)品歲月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自在深秋菊蕊黃,滿頭秀色做新娘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寧隨梅笑經(jīng)風(fēng)雨,不羨桃開著艷裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡淡瓊花涵暮露,錚錚玉骨斗晨霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凋容依夢(mèng)抱枝老,墜地仍然溢暗香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔中呂·快活三帶朝天子〕誰寫塞北一段秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郎秀娟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山流彩光,綠葉染秋霜。楓紅松翠樺金黃,滿眼斑斕樣。 〔過〕稻香,果香,十里隨風(fēng)漾。徑邊野菊正芬芳,野鶩河中蕩。啼鳥追逐,游人歡暢,難描景秀爽。過往,嘆賞,小曲高聲唱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒露</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛淑春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拂面晨風(fēng)幾許涼,林涂色彩正梳妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝頭葉綴含情舞,野陌花開攜韻彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一字長天排雁陣,多聲離曲別家鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晶瑩玉露凝秋景,儲(chǔ)菜收瓜恐降霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒露吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馬占河</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)至中秋日漸涼,荷殘柳敗草枯黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西湖不見蜂蝶舞,北嶺難尋燕雀翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻谷彎腰糧滿囤,魚蝦擺尾蟹盈艙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金英盛綻迎風(fēng)立,露重寒深百卉殤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可我無緣再少年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姜濤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">過隙浮云一線天,閑愁煮酒夜難眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盈虧月有重圓日,可我無緣再少年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">果園</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肖國發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃樹山楂結(jié)碩果,枝頭小鳥展翎翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悠游黎庶觀風(fēng)景,爽氣傳來縷縷香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又賞五花山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)令深秋彩色濃,五花又賞入明瞳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松濤漫卷茫茫嶺,雁陣排空颯颯風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云寵藍(lán)天拋萬谷,誰看凰鳳落梧桐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山橫暮色連千樹,露結(jié)輕霜夜色融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋韻(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三木</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昨夜低溫南嶺過,今朝彩葉北坡出。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松杉翠綠顏依舊,樺柞紅黃色乍初。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">影友尋奇攝麗景,走族添趣採蘑菇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千溪蛙蚌潛沙底,九月興安展畫圖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">內(nèi)蒙古一游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相運(yùn)臣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青青碧草蔚藍(lán)天,遍地牛羊枕月眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奶酒杯杯逢遠(yuǎn)客,酥茶盞盞味芳鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 題鴨綠江斷橋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 楊娜(雅典娜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斷橋傲立浪花間,鐵骨曾支烽火天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">彈洞千瘡凝碧血,忠魂萬縷潤青山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云浮玉宇鑒今古舟剪清波織往還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新架飛虹連兩界,華燈閃爍照無眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠(yuǎn)望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏去荷塘枯竭窮,秋來不遇滿山紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桂香捧出瓊漿液,菊色溫馨舞勁風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">阡陌行(古詩)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煙雨望遠(yuǎn)村,午靜聽蟲鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雞啼十里外,犬歡一路跟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云淡蒼鷹搏,人近狡兔奔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林深回山雉,糧豐育肥豚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">采菊撥荒草,拾瓠扣柴門。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">過眼處處綠,入口餐餐新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生息三十載,生態(tài)趨平衡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)境泯物我,天地盡此身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寄情忘歲月,率性通古今。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人活在當(dāng)下,我活于渺暝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莊蝶夢(mèng)復(fù)夢(mèng),誰解浮游心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬事現(xiàn)代化,不改古文明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫謂老頑鯁,堪笑奇巧輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱觀塵世內(nèi),癡愚我一人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)遷我垂老,留連能幾春?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">城鄉(xiāng)一體化,開發(fā)已臨門。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">田園風(fēng)光好,來日何處尋?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趁此喘息力,了我歸去心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕.題圖《少年趣事》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杏黃秀潤沐南風(fēng),遙憶墻頭伏野童。戲問當(dāng)年甘澀味?相知雅謔笑鄉(xiāng)翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕?少年趣事》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">探枝黃杏浴熏風(fēng),鮮嫩招來饞嘴童。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聯(lián)想當(dāng)年偷寨果,泥娃眼下已成翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">定風(fēng)波. 建軍節(jié)感懷(依歐陽炯體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 贛水洪都盼曉陽,俊賢齊聚為民殤。彈雨橫飛滕閣見,堪羨。國魂挽救首鳴槍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 志士血旗誠祭奠。哀婉。淚花難斷誓言昂。丑類惡行遭禍譴,唏嘆。軍威嚴(yán)整固祺祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師【定風(fēng)波?建軍節(jié)感懷】(新韻-依歐陽炯體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 已備齊全待曉陽,群英聚義救國殤。子彈上膛穹宇見,欽羨。南昌打響第一槍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 血染幟旗魂魄奠。悲婉。肝腸寸斷志宣昂。洋鬼內(nèi)奸遭眾譴,噓嘆。清淤除患促祺祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游西安浐灞濕地公園(詩二首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">&lt;一&gt;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七月驕陽似火燃,賞荷浐灞再游園。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花稀葉茂多飛鳥,上下穿梭惹愛憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">&lt;二&gt;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">濕地公園好景觀,東西水域緊相連。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">周遭放眼繁花錦,但見清漣紅掌翻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和力平老師《七絕?游西安浐灞濕地公園1-2》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長安腳下若柴燃,浐灞芳菲妝靚園。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">葉翠花疏群雀唳,穿枝覓侶愛相憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">特色公園真可觀,蟬鳴蛙鼓韻相連。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">引來鳧在蓮塘戲,東逛西游赤掌翻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和朱力平老師《七絕·游西安浐灞濕地公園1-2》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驕陽似火烤柴燃,浐灞風(fēng)光譽(yù)滿園。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林茂花繁藏雀鳥,凄聲求偶惹人憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">濕地公園放眼觀,鶴鳴蛙鼓響聲連。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花紅柳綠荷蓮綻,吸引鷗鳧赤掌翻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律?寒露(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚秋濕地泛金黃,銜露芳菲漫淡香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瘦蕊偏逢濃靄躪,枯枝又遇冷風(fēng)嗆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷塘隱隱聽蛙鼓,雁陣約約越嶺翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠(yuǎn)望山巒青漸褪,橐駝負(fù)重韻詩行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻衣非老師《七律·寒露》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深秋陌野正金黃,露潤籬菊散淡香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敗葉重逢天氣虐,殘荷屢遇北風(fēng)嗆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漁舟蕩槳舟前進(jìn),雁陣橫空陣遠(yuǎn)翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舉目群山脫綠色,橐駝闊步路途長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?霜葉吟(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依欞望外西風(fēng)烈,盡染丹楓滿巷紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仿若長廊鋪地毯,梅妃挽帝步行宮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和衣非老師《七絕·霜葉吟》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋晚風(fēng)吹聲颯颯,楓香染葉滿街紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如同過道重鋪毯,恰似新皇入錦宮。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">國慶歡歌(七律兩首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旭日光芒皓曜東,街衢里巷國旗紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山青水秀千般好,國泰家安萬業(yè)隆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舉世高歌歡慶慶,全民喜悅樂融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金樽美酒賀華誕,鼓樂笙簫韻不窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五星旗幟滿街紅,扮倩城鄉(xiāng)俏麗容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山舉花團(tuán)賀佳節(jié),風(fēng)搖水浪舞長龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溢倉盈廩原糧足,富國強(qiáng)兵業(yè)績豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吹打彈歌鑼鼓響,蒼黎歡慶意情濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律二首?國慶歡歌》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人民領(lǐng)袖謂澤東,映照中華代代紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悅賞城郭千巷美,欣觀店鋪萬家隆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌聲陣陣蒼生喜,舞步柔柔詩意融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偉業(yè)豐功銘史冊(cè),詞山賦海韻無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">懸掛旌旗遍巷紅,城池沃野現(xiàn)嬌容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">公交服務(wù)如天使,地鐵奔馳似劍龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼農(nóng)家糧囤滿,凝神村寨稻菽豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">母親華誕黎元賀,漫舞歡歌情意濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律二首·國慶歡歌》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偉大中華屹立東,神州處處映旗紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民生普惠年年厚,國運(yùn)振興日日隆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫舞歡歌欣喜喜,推杯換盞笑融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南疆北域迎華誕,晝夜通宵樂不窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">街頭巷尾遍旗紅,城市鄉(xiāng)村展靚容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巡昊神舟馳廣宇,連洲鐵路貫長龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民安樂業(yè)歡歌盛,谷滿盈菽存儲(chǔ)豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">更喜宏圖前景闊,九州同悅意情濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜迎國慶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬里山河披錦繡,紅旗漫卷喜神州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大街小巷人潮涌,歌舞聲聲難止休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和朱力平老師《七絕?喜迎國慶》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬里同歡華夏偉,蒼松翠柏飾神州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英雄肖像長街掛,暮曲晨歌未止休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和朱力平老師《七絕·喜迎國慶》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鑼鼓喧天華誕慶,彩旗飄舞漫神州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祖國強(qiáng)盛黎民樂,舉盞同歡難止休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">國慶歡歌(詞兩首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步蟾宮(蔣捷體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花團(tuán)錦繡秧歌舞。國慶日、黔黎歡度。金樽高舉祝神州,七六壽、國強(qiáng)民富。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)燃鞭炮銀花樹。滿堂喜、家家戶戶。放歌歡慶我中華,滿腔愛、傾情襟腑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉太平(辛棄疾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中華國誕。環(huán)球盛贊。九州黎庶笑聲漫。滿街花團(tuán)絢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃花盛開桂花綻?;▓@里,芳香滿。節(jié)日悠游不嫌晚。美景看醉眼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【國慶歡歌(詞二首)】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步蟾宮(新韻-依蔣捷體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 太平盛世歌含舞,母生日、舉國歡度。豐收厚禮獻(xiàn)中華,政局穩(wěn)、民強(qiáng)邦富。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 長街短巷紅旗樹,五星耀、千家萬戶戶。城池陌上賀“十一”,那盛況、感人肺腑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉太平(新韻-依辛棄疾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 吾國壽誕。神州禮贊。大江南北頌歌漫。草坪鮮葩絢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋菊正妍木樨綻。街區(qū)苑,清馨滿。假日閑情韻晨晚。艷麗觀醉眼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《國慶歡歌》(詞二首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步蟾宮(新韻-蔣捷體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 舉國各地齊歌舞,母華誕、庶黎歡度。生活美好上層樓,感恩黨,脫貧民富。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 紅旗面面城鄉(xiāng)樹,慶生日、千門萬萬戶。激情跳躍賀佳節(jié),鼓樂響,震人肺腑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉太平(新韻-辛棄疾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 祖國圣誕,人人禮贊,北疆南域唱聲漫。簇?fù)砘ㄜ嚱k。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 菊花耐寒傲霜綻?;h笆院,香馨滿。假日觀瞻不嫌晚。韻味瞧醉眼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨霖鈴?國慶抒懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金風(fēng)送爽。正神州慶,萬里晴曠。紅旗漫卷街巷,欣歌舞處,人潮初漲。稻菽揚(yáng)波千頃,恰年豐時(shí)暢。念此際、邦泰民安,一派繁華盡安享。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初心未改承新望。愿傾心、秉正持清尚。更期百業(yè)興盛,民意順、道寬風(fēng)朗。歲歲今朝,長守公平,共譜和唱。待日后、華夏宏圖,再續(xù)山河壯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻國田老師【雨霖鈴?國慶抒懷】(新韻-)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋琴好棒!爾濱歡慶,處處交響。公園廣場(chǎng)頌唱,輕歌曼舞,街區(qū)回蕩。巷陌紅旗招展,抗倭英雄亮??次忠啊⒑坦冉瘘S,馥郁芬芳共分享。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 勤勞塑造冰城壯。祖國興、萬戶家庭旺。用心筑夢(mèng)圓夢(mèng),執(zhí)政穩(wěn)、令行舒暢。把碗端平,服務(wù)蒼生,百姓欣賞。俱往矣、碧水逐波,后浪推前浪!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">國慶禮贊(詞二首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉太平?林都勝景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松濤漫崗,林泉漾光。小溪流韻悠揚(yáng),看峰巒煥妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倉盈粟香,民歡歲祥。巡青護(hù)綠情長,共山河永芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">定風(fēng)波?神州巨變</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">箭指蒼穹探斗牛。銀鷹破霧駕云游。鐵脈縱橫連四海。何快。長虹跨海臥潮頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天眼巡天搜浩渺??鞍痢P蹘熈嘘囆l(wèi)金甌。莫道滄桑今又是。崛起。春風(fēng)萬里馭洪流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和國田老師【國慶禮贊(詞二首)】(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(1)醉太平?林都勝景(依劉過體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 濤聲撼崗,山林透光。五星旗幟飄揚(yáng)。望巒梳麗妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 畦田溢香,金秋瑞祥。勤勞意蘊(yùn)深長,愿伊春久芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(2)定風(fēng)波?神州巨變(依歐陽炯體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 航母飛天探斗牛,穿云破靄任其游。笑看星河和瀚海。特快,閑翁雅興韻潮頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 宇宙穿行巡浩渺。奇傲,威風(fēng)凜凜話金甌。借問仙尊何又是?奮起,乘風(fēng)破浪駕洪流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和陳國田老師《國慶禮贊》(詞二首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1·醉太平·林都勝景(新韻-劉過體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 濤聲掠崗,山泉泛光。順風(fēng)旗幟飄揚(yáng)。嶺坡添錦妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 糜菽送香,村屯兆祥。辛勤汗水流長,祝林城永芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.定風(fēng)波·神州巨變(新韻-歐陽炯體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 巡昊神舟探斗牛,蒼穹浩瀚盡情游。鐵路延伸通四海。想快。跨嶺虹橋落潮頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 各業(yè)騰飛吹號(hào)角。真傲。蒸蒸日上話金甌。過往貧窮今又是?挺立。和平奮起蕩激流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠秋 ( 平水三十韻之 一東)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絢麗秋光樂作東,金鋪大地韻無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">灑涼剔去炎炎日,除熱迎來爽爽風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沃野歡歌熟禾子,池塘喜慶結(jié)蓮蓬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)最是農(nóng)忙季,眼望良田五谷豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠秋(平水三十韻之 二冬)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俊麗林都俊麗容,秋光漫卷罩千峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝枯綠退楊和柳,葉翠青存柏與松。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗照嬌陽催快熟,緩流碧水響潺淙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿山遍野結(jié)珍果,八百興安香味濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賞刁柏春先生兩首《詠秋》——兼贊“二冬”韻作之佳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春先生兩首《詠秋》分循“平水韻”一東、二冬,皆以秋景為骨、鄉(xiāng)心為魂,一寫平原秋熟之歡,一繪林都秋實(shí)之盛。兩首各有妙處,而“二冬”韻作尤顯筆力,于取景、立意、煉字間見巧思,將秋之“俊”與“豐”寫得立體鮮活,更具獨(dú)特韻味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、“一東”韻作:平原秋熟的明快速寫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《詠秋(一東)》以“絢麗秋光”開篇,聚焦平原秋日的開闊景象:“金鋪大地”勾勒田野泛黃的壯闊,“灑涼剔熱”直白點(diǎn)出秋爽特質(zhì),再以“沃野禾熟”“池塘蓮蓬”錨定農(nóng)間秋景,末句“農(nóng)忙”“五谷豐”收束于豐收的實(shí)景,整體如一幅明快的秋熟速寫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 全詩語言通俗曉暢,“樂作東”“爽爽風(fēng)”等表述鮮活接地氣,精準(zhǔn)捕捉平原秋天“暑退糧熟”的核心特征,傳遞出豐收的喜悅,是一首質(zhì)樸真切的秋日贊歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二、“二冬”韻作:林都秋景的精深工筆(尤見佳處)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 相較“一東”的明快,《詠秋(二冬)》聚焦“林都”(暗合“八百興安”地域特色),以更細(xì)膩的筆觸、更豐富的層次,將秋景寫得有骨有肉,其“佳”可從三方面細(xì)品:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 1. 取景有“辨”:于秋景中見生機(jī),打破“秋衰”俗見</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 傳統(tǒng)詠秋多寫“葉落枝枯”的蕭瑟,此詩卻以“枝枯綠退楊和柳,葉翠青存柏與松”形成對(duì)比——既不回避楊柳的秋枯,更突出松柏的常青,在“秋的俊麗”中藏“生機(jī)的堅(jiān)守”。這種“辨景”的眼光,讓秋景不再是單一的“凋零”或“絢爛”,而是多面的、有韌性的,立意更顯深刻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2. 煉字有“活”:動(dòng)靜相襯,秋景如在眼前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 詩中動(dòng)詞與疊詞的運(yùn)用尤為精妙:“漫卷”寫秋光鋪展山間的動(dòng)態(tài),似見秋意隨風(fēng)拂過千峰;“響潺淙”以聽覺襯靜,讓“緩流碧水”有了聲音的質(zhì)感,動(dòng)靜相襯間,林都的秋更顯靈動(dòng);“催快熟”賦予“朗照驕陽”以暖意,不似夏日灼人,反成催熟珍果的“助力”,用字精準(zhǔn)又含溫情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 3. 立意有“根”:地域特色融于秋景,情味更濃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 末句“八百興安香味濃”直接錨定地域——興安嶺的秋,不只是抽象的“秋光”,更是“滿山珍果”的具體香氣,讓秋景有了明確的“故鄉(xiāng)坐標(biāo)”。相較于“一東”韻作的普適性秋景,這份“地域?qū)佟钡那镂叮屧姷那楦懈涞?、更真摯,讀來如身臨其境,感受到林都獨(dú)有的秋日厚重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 兩首《詠秋》各展所長,“一東”勝在質(zhì)樸明快,“二冬”則在取景、煉字、立意上更見精深,尤其將地域特色與秋景生機(jī)相融,打破俗套又飽含真情,堪稱詠秋佳作中的亮眼之作。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">露落霜桂香暗度</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三秋時(shí)節(jié)微寒布,露落桂花香暗度。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俊麗嬌顏爛漫開,游人觀賞頻頻赴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江城子*霜秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮秋時(shí)節(jié)季寒涼。葉飛揚(yáng)。木凋傷。寒露滴珠、霧氣結(jié)成霜。機(jī)具隆隆收稻菽,糧收盡,谷歸倉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿園花色映秋光。菊花黃。桂花香??∶梨倘弧⒏髯陨⒎曳?。最是繁忙霜季里,勤勞手,譜華章。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主辦:律詩審稿組</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策劃:刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯:吳華彪 陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼審核:陳國田</span></p>